you've got a sweet style, and it was very refreshing to see someone not waste a flash with buckets of red everywhere. by changing the colors you made it more tasteful and enjoyable. great work, i can't wait to see what you make next!
it's a good title screen
and once it accompanies a movie of the same calibur i'm sure you'll have quite a hit.
"make like an emo and slit" is brilliant, this is very funny stuff. the last few lilium parodies have been utter tripe, but i totally dig this one. good work!
Hooray, I'm not 'utter tripe'!
your explosions look very nice indeed, i can't wait to see what you do with them in a genuine movie!
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback... Especially the good feedback! :)
keep with it!
i couldn't hear what clark/martin was saying at the end there, and there was a bit of trouble with that white bar at the bottom. flash takes a long time to get the hang of, and it's obvious that you've made some improvement, so don't give up even if this one doesn't score well. newgrounds can be vicious for those just learning flash, but stick to it, i'm sure you'll turn out some really impressive things!
thanks. I plan on getting flash at home soon so that I can make better, longer movies.
it's obvious how much effort you put into this, it turned out great. i liked every bit of it, and i think this is one of the first FBF movies on newgrounds that didn't have crap awful music. i think the only part i could point out for improvement is that your squiggles that wormed their way around were a little jaggedy, and i think making them sleek with the pencil tool or something would have made them fit in better with the geometric shapes. very nice job, though.
very nicely done
you have a great mind for how to compose an effective scene, so don't worry too much about your drawing skills. those will come with time and practice, and remember that it's really the content of the flash that makes it worthwhile (and you nailed that). in the meantime keep up the marvelous work, can't wait to see what you produce next!
stop submitting this tripe. do you feel hella cool 'cause you can turn out worthless crap and then get all your friends to vote it onto the site? you're pariahs, and all you do is lower the quality of newgrounds. just stop already.
Your kind comments motivate us even further.
the editing was good
this reminded me of a daft punk video: well edited and something interesting to look at, but ultimately not enough content. there was nothing innovative here, simple geometric shapes going through motions that we all could've made on our first day of flash. toss a little more substance into your next film and maintain the level of editing quality and you'll go far.
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